Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, the most actual

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is environmental

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. In the past

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decade

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, our ecosystem is destroyed by ourselves.

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interested in that

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people

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are trying to find the right way to solve

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issue and one of the examples is

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it by technology. I would assert, that I disagree with

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statement.

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, one of the most actual environmental

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is pollution which is caused by our society.

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are

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who cause more issues in our world.

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if the bigger danger for

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nature

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people

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. Actually, the best option is

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the right attitude to

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explain

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causes big damages for the

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damages

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are destroying

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layer, causing global warming and

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greenhouse

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effect.

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the first environmental

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problems

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biological teacher or scientist. These

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caused

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people

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society

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not stop

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our environment, soon she will be destroyed.

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demanding

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our environment cause society when they pollute nature,

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more and more factories and

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acticities

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activities

which destroy everything

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. From my point of view, technology

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is not the solution

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problem

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the problem

a problem

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first we should change

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Apr 26, 2023

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