Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, the most actual

problem

is environmental

problems

. In the past

decadec

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decade

decades

, our ecosystem is destroyed by ourselves.

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interested in that

problem

people

are trying to find the right way to solve

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solve

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it by technology. I would assert, that I disagree with

this

statement.

Firstly

, one of the most actual environmental

problems

is pollution which is caused by our society.

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, in more

cases

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people

are

ones

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the ones

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who cause more issues in our world.

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this

, how technologies can help with

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problems

if the bigger danger for

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nature

are

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people

. Actually, the best option is

promote

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the right attitude to

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the planet

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and

expalin

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explain

for

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what can lead

this

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to this

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uncorrect

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incorrect

behavior

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behaviour

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.

Secondly

, a large number of factories and human bad influence activities

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causes big damages for the

natute

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nature

statute

.

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damages

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damage

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are destroying

ozone

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the ozone

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layer, causing global warming and

green house

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greenhouse

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effect.

That is

the first environmental

problems

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problem

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, about which discuss

every

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biological teacher or scientist. These

problems

caused

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by

people

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influence and if

the

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society

do

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not stop

do

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the

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damaging things

for

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our environment, soon she will be destroyed.

Nevertheless

, despite the awareness,

people

are continue doing

this

damanding

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demanding

activities.

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, the most bigger danger

for

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our environment cause society when they pollute nature,

open

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more and more factories and

continue

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continues

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acticities

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activities

which destroy everything

around

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usaround

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. From my point of view, technology

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is not the solution

of

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problem

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the problem

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,

at

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the

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first we should change

people

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people's

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attitude

to

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toward

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the

problem

.