Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is environmental

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. In the past

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decade

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, our ecosystem is destroyed by ourselves.

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interested in that

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it by technology. I would assert, that I disagree with

this

statement.

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, one of the most actual environmental

problems

is pollution which is caused by our society.

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people

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who cause more issues in our world.

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problems

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nature

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people

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and

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explain

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what can lead

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uncorrect

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behavior

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, a large number of factories and human bad influence activities

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causes big damages for the

natute

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nature

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damages

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are destroying

ozone

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the ozone

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layer, causing global warming and

green house

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greenhouse

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effect.

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the first environmental

problems

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, about which discuss

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biological teacher or scientist. These

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people

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society

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not stop

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damaging things

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our environment, soon she will be destroyed.

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, despite the awareness,

people

are continue doing

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damanding

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demanding

activities.

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, the most bigger danger

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our environment cause society when they pollute nature,

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more and more factories and

continue

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acticities

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activities

which destroy everything

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. From my point of view, technology

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is not the solution

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the

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first we should change

people

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attitude

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the

problem

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