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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages o f taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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Accepting challenges could be an essential factor for a person when considering work-related and self-related aspects of life. In
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 achieve something we may always have to risk another thing in return. It can be either an object or a person or even a memory. The reward and the risk will increase or decrease as alternative variables. In my opinion, risks that aimed achievement got their own benefits than its shortcomings. Facing a challenge at working place can be terrifying, especially if you are left alone to deal with it by yourself. As an example, I heard the news of a restaurant manager who got beaten by a customer defending his employees recently. He had taken the risk knowing its consequences. The outcome was definitely not a positive one, as he was hospitalized after the incident.
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 we always have to think twice and be cautious prior to involve in
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 situations. We have to keep reminding ourselves that, our own life is much more important than any job in the world.
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, we’ve seen many success stories of well-renowned people that took a surprising turn in their professional life. The founder of Odel, Otara Gunawardena started her clothing brand in the back of her minivan with a budget of a few rupees. She was a biological science graduate at the time and she was risking it all simply to open up her own business. A few years later she became one of the top notched businesswomen in Sri Lanka. Most of the time we rely on other’s comments and thoughts about our own lives. I believe making your own decisions about getting married, having children and moving abroad etc is way more preferred since these outsiders won’t be helping you
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. It happens to be you, that should manage and survive through all of
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. In conclusion, I think going through a challenging situation is beneficial if the result is an overwhelming one.
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, we have to think deeply and sort out the priorities in
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