Last semester a classmate let you borrow an important textbook. You realize that you still have the book after your friend has already gone back home overseas. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter: • Give an apology • Find out if/when they need the book back • Tell them what you will do to fix the problem Your letter should be between 150-200 words.

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Dear Deeksha, I hope you are in the pink of your health and enjoying your home with your family. Things are good here as well, though I have been missing you lately. Yesterday,

while

cleaning my cupboard I found the mathematics textbook that you lent me for practice in the

last

semester. I was so disappointed with myself that I failed to return it on time when you were here. I sincerely apologise for being so irresponsible.

Also

, I had no intention of keeping it with me for

such

a long time. Considering it to be an important subject, I was wondering if you need the book back. If yes, I will try to make some arrangements to deliver it to you safely. Next month, my brother is travelling to your country for his work assignment, so maybe he can help me return it to you. Once again, I am sorry for making the mess. Please do let me know, if the book is required. I will ensure that you receive it soon. I will be eagerly waiting for your response. Best Regards, KJ

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