Many parents give their children certain chores or tasks to do at home. Should children have to do chores or tasks at home? Be sure to explain why you think it is a good idea or a bad idea. Include examples to support your reasons.
These days the length of
life
is becoming longer in many nations of the world. Use synonyms
This
process has both pros and cons that should be considered and discussed. In Linking Words
this
essay, these two sides will be taken into account and explained, Linking Words
as well as
supported with examples.
On the one hand, increasing Linking Words
life
expectancy definitely has its benefits. Use synonyms
People
often say that our Use synonyms
life
is too short to manage to do or try everything Use synonyms
you
want. Correct pronoun usage
we
However
, long existence can provide an opportunity to do more Linking Words
desire
things. Replace the word
desired
For instance
, you can travel all around the world, study how to play all Linking Words
musician
instruments, learn a huge number of languages, try Replace the word
musical
a new hobbies
and so on. Correct the article-noun agreement
new hobbies
a new hobby
Moreover
, somebody can make a big family and see Linking Words
a
great-grandchildren. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Besides
, young Linking Words
people
can find elderly Use synonyms
people
who are important to themselves or to society. Old can give Use synonyms
to
young a lot of important knowledge and tell Change preposition
apply
about
different experiences.
Correct pronoun usage
them about
On the other hand
, drawbacks and issues come up with a long Linking Words
life
of Use synonyms
people
. Not every old person can live without help and support both physical and financial. Use synonyms
For example
, some of them need an assistant that can help at home and do usual daily tasks, or maybe even help with moving and Linking Words
walk
. But not so many Wrong verb form
walking
people
Use synonyms
ready
to do Add a missing verb
are ready
such
a job. Linking Words
Additionally
, Linking Words
government
should pay money for their living because the elderly Add an article
the government
people
aren’t able to make money for Use synonyms
life
by themselves. With Use synonyms
increasing
amount of aged, will be an increase Add an article
the increasing
an increasing
of
Change preposition
in
spendings
on them and that can provide Fix the agreement mistake
spending
to
economic problems. Change preposition
apply
Also
, Linking Words
it is clear that
Linking Words
Use synonyms
life
of Correct article usage
the life
old
generation is not so simple and wonderfulCorrect article usage
the old
,
because they can suffer from different health issues. That makes lives depressed, heavy and joyless.
Remove the comma
apply
To sum up
, increasing Linking Words
life
expectancy has advantages and disadvantages. It is undoubtedly absolutely amazing that Use synonyms
people
can enjoy their Use synonyms
lifetime
longer and realize all things they want, but I reckon that it is terrible when somebody Replace the word
life
suffer
from health problems and Change the verb form
suffers
feel
joyless, so Change the verb form
feels
usual
length of Correct article usage
the usual
life
isn’t worse than a little longer one.Use synonyms
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