Many parents give their children certain chores or tasks to do at home. Should children have to do chores or tasks at home? Be sure to explain why you think it is a good idea or a bad idea. Include examples to support your reasons.

These days the length of
life
is becoming longer in many nations of the world.
This
process has both pros and cons that should be considered and discussed. In
this
essay, these two sides will be taken into account and explained,
as well as
supported with examples. On the one hand, increasing
life
expectancy definitely has its benefits.
People
often say that our
life
is too short to manage to do or try everything
you
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we
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want.
However
, long existence can provide an opportunity to do more
desire
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desired
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things.
For instance
, you can travel all around the world, study how to play all
musician
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musical
show examples
instruments, learn a huge number of languages, try
a new hobbies
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new hobbies
a new hobby
show examples
and so on.
Moreover
, somebody can make a big family and see
a
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apply
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great-grandchildren.
Besides
, young
people
can find elderly
people
who are important to themselves or to society. Old can give
to
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apply
show examples
young a lot of important knowledge and tell
about
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them about
show examples
different experiences.
On the other hand
, drawbacks and issues come up with a long
life
of
people
. Not every old person can live without help and support both physical and financial.
For example
, some of them need an assistant that can help at home and do usual daily tasks, or maybe even help with moving and
walk
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walking
show examples
. But not so many
people
ready
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are ready
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to do
such
a job.
Additionally
,
government
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the government
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should pay money for their living because the elderly
people
aren’t able to make money for
life
by themselves. With
increasing
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the increasing
an increasing
show examples
amount of aged, will be an increase
of
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in
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spendings
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spending
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on them and that can provide
to
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apply
show examples
economic problems.
Also
,
it is clear that
life
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the life
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of
old
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the old
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generation is not so simple and wonderful
,
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because they can suffer from different health issues. That makes lives depressed, heavy and joyless.
To sum up
, increasing
life
expectancy has advantages and disadvantages. It is undoubtedly absolutely amazing that
people
can enjoy their
lifetime
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life
show examples
longer and realize all things they want, but I reckon that it is terrible when somebody
suffer
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suffers
show examples
from health problems and
feel
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feels
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joyless, so
usual
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the usual
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length of
life
isn’t worse than a little longer one.
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