The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.

The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.
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The given graph illustrates the total
demand
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4 different types of
fiber
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fibre
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namely: polyester, cotton, cellulosic and wool
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worldwide from 1980 to 2015. In general,
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the
demand
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polyester increased rapidly to become the most popular textile,
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wool decreased to no
demand
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in 2015. Looking at the chart for more detail, the need for polyester accounted for around 5
million
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tons
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in 1980 and climbed significantly to nearly 70
million
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tons
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, which was the highest
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textile
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in 2015.
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, the need for cotton was the highest figure in the first recorded year ( around 15
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tons
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) and doubled over a 35-year period. Starting at around 5
million
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tons
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in 1980,
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figure for cellulosic
fiber
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remained unchanged in the first 15 years and grew triple to reach 10
million
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tons
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in 2015.
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, there was an increase in the
demand
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wool from 1980 to 2000,
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, these statistics declined to become approximately no
demand
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in 2015.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words demand, million, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global demand
  • Textile industry
  • Natural fibers
  • Synthetic fibers
  • Manufacturing advancements
  • Fashion trends
  • Consumer preferences
  • Economic factors
  • Purchasing power
  • Eco-friendly materials
  • Market share
  • Production capacity
  • Polyester
  • Cotton
  • Wool
  • Nylon
  • Demand curve
  • Sustainability
  • Textile innovation
  • Fluctuations
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