The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.
The given graph illustrates the total
demand
of
4 different types of Change preposition
for
fiber
namely: polyester, cotton, cellulosic and wool Change the spelling
fibre
in
worldwide from 1980 to 2015.
In general, Change preposition
apply
while
the demand
of
polyester increased rapidly to become the most popular textile, Change preposition
for
these
Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
wool decreased to no Change preposition
apply
demand
in 2015.
Looking at the chart for more detail, the need for polyester accounted for around 5 million
tons
in 1980 and climbed significantly to nearly 70 million
tons
, which was the highest demand
of
Change preposition
for
textile
in 2015. Fix the agreement mistake
textiles
In addition
, the need for cotton was the highest figure in the first recorded year ( around 15 million
tons
) and doubled over a 35-year period.
Starting at around 5 million
tons
in 1980, this
figure for cellulosic fiber
remained unchanged in the first 15 years and grew triple to reach 10 Change the spelling
fibre
million
tons
in 2015. In contrast
, there was an increase in the demand
of
wool from 1980 to 2000, Change preposition
for
however
, these statistics declined to become approximately no demand
in 2015.Submitted by thanhvinhdoi338 on
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