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Nowadays more and more people read news on the Internet. Nevertheless, newspapers will remain an important source of news and information for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The most important factor that makes everyone recognize the circumstances around the world is having ubiquitous access to
information
.
Newspapers
 have been the most prevalent and classic source of
information
 in the past until now.
On the other hand
, I personally think that the Internet will completely replace the
newspaper
 in the future for many reasons. With regard to
newspaper
 usage, the statistics provide that the amount of expenditure for purchasing
newspapers
 is moderately decreased. The campaign of saving the world has made
people
 have more attention to reducing paper usage which can make a lot of waste.
Moreover
, only letters cannot convey emotion as understandable as pictures, videos, or voices.
Therefore
, the popularity of the
newspaper
 has fallen
due to
 the inability of responding to the needs of
people
 in the future.
On the other hand
, the development of technology has encouraged us to use several sources
instead
 of
newspapers
.
Although
 the digital book cannot be an alternative source of
information
, there are a plethora of platforms that we can
also
 access the
news
 rapidly
such
 as television, Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter.
Consequently
, all generations whether teenagers, middle-aged
people
, or old
people
 have been choosing these to recognize the
news
. In conclusion,
newspapers
 were the initial platform for getting the
news
 that has got plenty of popularity in the past, yet it is not adequate to respond to the needs of
people
 in
this
 age. It requires convenience, accessibility, and eco-friendliness.
Thus
, the internet will fully replace the
newspaper
 of being the platform for reading
news
 or
information
 in the future.
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