A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

Dear Sam, How are you, buddy? You can't imagine how happy I was to know that you are
finally
moving from Delhi to Toronto next month. Since you have asked for my
advise
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, I am going to tell you all about living in
this
beautiful place. The downtown is the heart of the city where you have all the offices, commercial centers and
what not
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. But, I suggest you find a place in the North York area. It is close enough to the downtown, like 10 mins away, still, has a very calm and soothing vibe, which just suits your style.
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important thing is the commute within the city. I must say, Toronto has one of the best public transportation
system
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that I have seen, and it's cheap too. Here we have subways, buses and Go-trains connecting all the major
centers
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around the area. The subways and busses run from 5 am to 11:00 pm within Toronto,
whereas
, the Go-Train runs on a schedule connecting nearby cities. As a new
commer
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comer
, another
crutial
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crucial
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thing is building your own social circle. Since you love football, I would say join a football club and get in touch with
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folks. I will
also
sign you up
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my Poker club, and we can hang out with my friends as well. I think you are good to start with these, and I will always be here to help you if you need anything. See you soon Apoorva
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