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In the future ,noboday will buy prited newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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These days, the
internet
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 has become a rival to print media. It is often argued that most of us now prefer to acquire
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 entirely from the
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 web
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 some might agree with
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, I completely disagree and in
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,
newspapers
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 are still considered to be the most traditional means of source in many countries as the
internet
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 is still not available in many parts of rural areas.
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, In Pakistan’s regional Punjab villages
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 as Kohi Wala, grandfathers read
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 in the morning
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 a cup of tea every day as a ritual. If
this
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then
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newspapers
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 would be considered
as
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 essential means of vast
information
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. Another reason why I disagree is because
newspapers
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 print the content of authentic and renowned
journalist
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journalists
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 and it provides
information
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 or
news
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 which is verified globally
whereas
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 the
internet
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 holds many vague
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 from unauthorized sources. Take articles of world-famous journalist Neil Shehan as an example who remained
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 editor and content-writer
of
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 BBC
newspapers
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. He wrote numerous articles including one on missing MH370 Malaysian airline. I strongly believe that validated
news
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 is all
what
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 everyone would want.
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, what is more important than not searching over the
internet
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 for
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true
news
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.
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 In conclusion,
although
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 it is a common belief that the
internet
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 has stormed the world in terms of
information
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 and
news
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. I believe
newspapers
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' cultural values and reliability
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 a priority. Personally, I think printed media would continue to hold its unique value.
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