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The technology development has affected social relationships from person to person. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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There has been much policy advocacy related to how
technology
 has affected human
communication
 in different ways.
Although
, some might consider it
benefical
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beneficial
;
however
,I believe it to be extremely catastrophic. Not only because it impacted emotional sentiments and basic human
skill
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 but
also
 because it led to mental health problems.
This
 essay will explore how these negatives have the potential to outweigh any positives. There are multiple disadvantages of
technology
 offering distinct socialization.
Firstly
, it creates a hindrance in judging the emotions of another person. As via the
internet
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 we are unable to read any facial expressions, judge body language or tone of the person. Take the example of virtual
health-care
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 consultation. The doctors show no sympathy towards the patients as they can barely comprehend their emotions.
Hence
,
such
 technologies resulted in a decline
of
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 emotional values in humans.
Secondly
, apart from human growth, verbal
communication
 skills are essential to any human like any other life
skills
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. As technologies are replacing
such
 learnt
behaviors
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 via certain apps leading to poor human interactions.
For instance
,
Voiceover
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 app lets the user go to shop and play some
audios
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 for the stuff he wants to shop for.
Such
 apps have
therefore
 been one of the main catalysts of
detorious
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delirious
communication
.
Thus
,
technology
 has limited good
communication
 skills.
Finally
, the problem of isolation resulted in many mental health disorders which has become seriously challenging in many parts of the world now as people seek more psychologists help to cherish relationships. To
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, I believe,
while
technology
 can be very convenient but it comes with the cost of mental diseases, decreased human relationships and learnt abilities
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