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Some people think that excessive use of smart phones badly affects teenager’s literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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First of all,
this
 age is known as a digital age and many aspects of society depend on electronic tools . many psychologists refer to the disadvantages of using smartphones on mental health . I believe that many problems , especially education difficulties connected with spent children most of their time playing video
games
 or electronic chat.
To begin
 with , deep learning needs to focus on one subject at a specific time without any distractions.
In other words
, if pupils
study
 in unsuitable
media
such
 as studying during watching TV or following electronic
games
 they will achieve lower knowledge ,
this
 is
due to
the
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that social
media
 and video
games
 have more characteristics which can attract any child .
for instance
 , in one
study
 published in a scientific journal about
study
 under destructions comparison
study
 in calm
media
 , the results showed that learning in a calm place without any electronic tools increases of understanding subjects .
Hence
 , what can be said is that not only does reducing video
games
 help teenagers to focus on their subjects , but it
also
 improves their mental health.
Furthermore
, there are many psychological kids diseases related to hyper use of technology . to illustrate , teenagers suffer from weak attention because of digital life and some diseases become strange phenomena
such
 as autism .
in addition
 , many educators suggested some factors to achieve a high-performance learning process and the most important factor was preventing or reducing social
media
 from student life .
Thus
 , the best way to protect children from learning difficulties is to offer suitable
media
 with low electronic items. In conclusion,
after
this
 essay has manifested the points mentioned above , it can be reiterated that decrease using smartphones is the best way to achieve a high-quality education system . I am convinced that education condition is an important factor in improving the learning of children .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pervasive
  • diminished
  • sustained
  • complex vocabulary
  • sentence structures
  • shorthand communication
  • adhere
  • standard rules
  • punctuation
  • educational apps
  • real-time communication
  • comprehension levels
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