Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
It is true that there are some students that work
while
studying and Linking Words
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lead to insufficient time for education and feeling under pressure. The causes of the issue and what kinds of methods can be taken to solve Linking Words
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will be discussed in the essay.
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To begin
with, there are various factors that contribute to Linking Words
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problem. Linking Words
Firstly
, the tuition fee is expensive ,especially for the higher degree , Linking Words
for example
, you have to pay about one million to study for a bachelor's degree and you have to pay about two million to study for a master's degree. Linking Words
Moreover
, there are more costs that pupils have to pay Linking Words
such
as their meals and their accommodation. Linking Words
In addition
, some students have to work to find more money to help their families because of poverty.
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problem, I suggest that the government should play a crucial role in the education system. To start with, states should provide extra funds for other expenses that the learner have to as the reason that not only the tuition fee that they have to pay but Linking Words
also
the costs that are necessary Linking Words
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as food and transportation like buses and skytrain. Linking Words
However
, if the budget is not enough to use with everyone. Linking Words
Hence
, those need to limit by extra conditions, Linking Words
for instance
, people that have good grades, to choose people that receive these funds.
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happens because the expense of the study is costly. Linking Words
Therefore
, pupils have to do some part-time jobs to support Linking Words
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