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The table below shows the changes in some household types in Canada from 1984 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the changes in some household types in Canada from 1984 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
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 table shows the changes in household types in Canada.
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, in the
year
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 1984, most of the Canadian family type was dependent
children
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 family, which 52 per cent (%). And
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 number will keep decreasing in the future. It will cut down about 6%~2% every 10 years. On the one hand, the household type was not very usual during
this
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 period, only 6% were single.
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,
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 data will go increase since 1994 and it will keep rising to 12% in the
year
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 2020.
On the other hand
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, when the dependent
children
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 family is no longer the main household type,the percentage of no
children
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 family keep increasing. There was 19% in 1984, but
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 number is rising up slowly and it became 25 in the
year
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 2020.
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 the number of lone-parent families was not very popular during 1984~2020. But its data is still rose up. Once there was 4% is the lone family. But in the
year
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 2020, it rose to 12%.
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, there was not too much change in the percentages of non-dependent
children
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 families. It only has a 1%~2% change during those particular years.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, children with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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