The chart below gives information about how families in one country spenttheir weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the proportions of weekly income spent on eight categories in a country in 1968 and 2018 respectively.
Overall
, the percentage of money spent on most of those categories declined, Linking Words
while
the citizens spend more part of their salaries on recreation.
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It is clear that
the percentage of expenses on most of those items went down over the 50-year period. The expenditure on food was the primary one and accounted for 35% in 1968. Linking Words
However
, it had seen a significant decrease to 17% by 2008. Linking Words
Moreover
, the proportion of the income spent on fuel and power, clothing and Linking Words
footware
and personal goods slightly declined in the same period as well, Correct your spelling
footwear
by
4% to 5%.
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from
However
, some of those categories increased during the given period. It is noticeable that people spend more part of their income on leisure, from 9% to 22%. Linking Words
Similarly
, people tended to allocate more budget Linking Words
on
housing and transport, which rose from 10% to 19% and 8% to 14% Change preposition
to
seperately
. What's more, the proportion of expenditure on Correct your spelling
separately
household
remained stable at 8%.Fix the agreement mistake
households
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