The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the life cycle of a
salmon
dividing it into different stages, from its egg stage
to adulthood. Overall
, salmon
fishes
go through six main phases to fully grow from their hatching period and they spend their lives in three distinct locations: river
, estuary and ocean.
Adult salmon
fishes
spawn and incubate eggs in the rivers. Thus
, the life cycle of a salmon
springs from the incubation stage
in a river
. After emerging from eggs, the infant salmon
spend their next stage
in freshwater and this
phase is called emergence. Then
, they stay in freshwater to grow further
. Thereupon
, these fishes
swim to river
estuaries where their rearing continues. At this
stage
, their size becomes a bit larger. Afterwards, the maturing fishes
migrate to the ocean and become adults. Finally
, grown-up salmons move to the river
for spawning and lay eggs. Therefore
, the life cycle of the next generation starts over.Submitted by galtarossaluca00 on
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