Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Having
children
in a family is not a common goal in society now. In Use synonyms
this
era, more and more Linking Words
people
choose to raise Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
children
later in their Use synonyms
life
. The reasons are many Use synonyms
people
want to enjoy their early Use synonyms
stage
of marriage and need more Use synonyms
money
to raise a Use synonyms
child
. In Use synonyms
this
essay, I will explain why the benefit of delaying having a Linking Words
child
overshadow the potential drawbacks.
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To begin
with, many Linking Words
people
postpone having Use synonyms
an
offspring because they prefer to enjoy their Correct article usage
apply
life
in early marriage. The reason is they want to pursue their dreams first. Use synonyms
For example
, they want to have a specialist degree to become a doctor. Linking Words
Moreover
, they do not have enough Linking Words
money
to raise a family. Use synonyms
People
in the early Use synonyms
stage
of their careers usually do not have more Use synonyms
money
and it leads them to have a better decision, which is to postpone having a Use synonyms
child
.
On one hand, there is a drawback of having a Use synonyms
baby
later in Use synonyms
life
, Use synonyms
such
as a difficulty in understanding a Linking Words
child
. Understanding a youth becomes difficult because the communication Use synonyms
do
not run well. Change the verb form
does
People
will hard to communicate Use synonyms
to
their Change preposition
with
children
because of Use synonyms
a
big gap Correct article usage
the
of
age there. The Change preposition
in
people
raised a Use synonyms
baby
when they are too old. Use synonyms
As a result
, the parents do not understand well what their Linking Words
children
want.
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However
, I would argue that the advantages outweigh the drawbacks. Postponing raising a family brings Linking Words
people
happier because they have more time to Use synonyms
having
quality time together. Wrong verb form
have
People
can enjoy travelling anywhere without thinking about a Use synonyms
baby
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, it gives a wider chance for many Linking Words
people
to focus on Use synonyms
their
early Change the word
the
stage
of Use synonyms
carrier
. Nowadays, the environment is highly competitive. Add an article
the carrier
People
indirectly have to compete with each other to achieve their top career as young as they can. Use synonyms
Thus
, they postpone raising a family. Linking Words
For instance
, in Linking Words
early
work Correct article usage
the early
stage
most consisted of 25 years old-Use synonyms
people
. If those Use synonyms
people
work very hard, getting a promotion Use synonyms
such
as a manager or young executive will be achieved faster. Having said that, it requires more focus and it leads them to postpone having a Linking Words
baby
.
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To conclude
, in Linking Words
this
era, most Linking Words
people
choose to postpone having Use synonyms
a
offspring because they want to enjoy their Correct article usage
apply
life
and they have not had enough Use synonyms
money
to raise a family. Use synonyms
While
raising a Linking Words
child
brings Use synonyms
a
difficulty for parents to understand their Remove the article
apply
child
, it brings more Use synonyms
joyfulness
and gives them a chance to more focus on their work.Replace the word
joy
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