Today, many people do not know their neighbors. Why is this? What can be done about this?
Individuality
increases every day all over the world. ,Also
individuality
affects the relationship of people
who live together in the same building or same site complex. In my ,opinion If we survey neighbours’ relationships and the effect of individuality
, we should have some results about neighbors' connections.
Firstly
, modern life
supports individuality
with the social network. The social network is important for people
's connection however
it is created a new type of communication. For ,example people
do not need a person who is next door, because there are too many friends in their networks. ,Also
they find two different types of people
in social networks. Because of that people
can not make a connection with their neighbours.
However
, humanity must find a way the increase of face to face connections. Probably If we look at our history we will find a way, because our civilization had grown with community
life
. Although
we are building a bigger life
complex nowadays. But we can not talk about community
life
there. For ,example I lived with almost two thousand people
in our site complex for two years. But I met my neighbours in our community
garden at a new year party. I am very grateful to our site complex’s manager to organized the party.
In conclusion, the people
who live together in the same building or complex should find a way about community
activities. For example
New Year's parties, religious festivals and many good things for celebration. We need to make more community
activities to develop our neighbourhood.Submitted by fatihmet on
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