Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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art
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subject
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my opinion which is in the favour of former view will be discussed Linking Words
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a sensible conclusion.
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Firstly
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art
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subject
is important at schools to excel students skill and interests. The Use synonyms
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subject
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art
and pursue that as a passion. Use synonyms
Moreover
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For instance
, a study conducted in Hong Kong revealed that Linking Words
art
classes motivated the youth to attend schools regularly.
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another viewpoint say that making Wrong verb form
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art
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subject
as mandatory at schools is a waste of time because there are other subjects in demand now. They believe that the present world is moving fast and there are many new things to learn. Use synonyms
Moreover
, they are suggesting other subjects related to technology Linking Words
such
as computer science, digital innovations and many more so that they can use that knowledge in future.
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To conclude
, I would like to say that Linking Words
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subject
is important in many ways. Use synonyms
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people
which view they are in favour of.Use synonyms
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