The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
This
diagram illustrates the stages of production of Linking Words
electricity
in a hydroelectric power station.
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It is clear that
the process is cyclical and consists of 4 main stages beginning with the deposit of Linking Words
water
behind the dam , the flow of Use synonyms
water
to generate Use synonyms
electricity
during the day Use synonyms
then
storage Linking Words
water
in Use synonyms
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the down
down stage
and Correct your spelling
downstage
finally
the pumping of Linking Words
water
at night to Use synonyms
upper
level.
First of all the Add an article
the upper
an upper
water
of the river saves behind of dam in the upper reservoir which has an intake at the bottom. during the day, intake is opened and Use synonyms
then
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water
flows down Use synonyms
in
the low-level reservoir. In the middle of the process , there is a turbine belonging to the generator. when the blades of that begin to move the generator creates Change preposition
into
electricity
and Use synonyms
finally
the products transmit through power lines to the national grid.
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In addition
, the Linking Words
water
of the down reservoir returns Use synonyms
through
the same way in the high-level storage at night by pumping Change preposition
in
water
with the turbine Use synonyms
due to
decline demand Linking Words
of
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for
electricity
.Use synonyms
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