The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
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This
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diagram illustrates the stages of production of
electricity
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in a hydroelectric power station.
It is clear that
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the process is cyclical and consists of 4 main stages beginning with the deposit of
water
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behind the dam , the flow of
water
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to generate
electricity
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during the day
then
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storage
water
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in
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the down
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down stage
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downstage
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and
finally
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the pumping of
water
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at night to
upper
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the upper
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level. First of all the
water
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of the river saves behind of dam in the upper reservoir which has an intake at the bottom. during the day, intake is opened and
then
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water
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flows down
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the low-level reservoir. In the middle of the process , there is a turbine belonging to the generator. when the blades of that begin to move the generator creates
electricity
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and
finally
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the products transmit through power lines to the national grid.
In addition
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, the
water
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of the down reservoir returns
through
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the same way in the high-level storage at night by pumping
water
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with the turbine
due to
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decline demand
of
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for
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electricity
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Reservoir
  • Penstock
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Transformer
  • High voltage
  • Renewable energy
  • Kinetic energy
  • Potential energy
  • Power grid
  • Sustainable
  • Flow rate
  • Energy conversion
  • Hydraulic pressure
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