The problem of litter on the streets of many towns and cities is getting worse. Why are we seeing more litter on our streets, and what can be done about it?

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throw their
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here and there on our streets which is why
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situation. It occurs for a variety of reasons which can be tackled by adopting some steps. There are a number of reasons why individuals throw their litter on the streets. One possible reason is that
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are not conscious about the environment because
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which they throw
such
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as plastics, vegetables and
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waste
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, packets and so on , these are polluted our air, water and soil.
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, plastic is not easily mixed in the soil and it emits gasses which are not good for the air and the public. Another reason is that
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is not put any rules and regulations.
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,
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like to keep their unnecessary things on the street and
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towns and cities are getting worse day by day.
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, India is stood
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1st position in the pollution
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because the country is not clean and tidy.
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, these problems can be solved by taking some actions.
To begin
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with,
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about
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natural safety.
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this
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reason, many
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should establish which will help to teach
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people
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about recycling and
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litter
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the right place.
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, In Bangalore Brack institution takes the steps about
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and glasses recycling process and teaches about it.
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, the institution
also
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put the dustbin
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road and area. What is
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the authorities have to make some laws about
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waste
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and have to
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about it. If
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do it,
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will not throw the
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on the street
due to
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the punishment. To illustrate, if any
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throw their litter on the road
instead
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of
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, the administration should charge on them. In conclusion,
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have to
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about
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the reaction of throwing unnecessary things
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to focus on it unless cities and
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will get damaged and the country will turn into
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a polluted country.
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