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The problem of litter on the streets of many towns and cities is getting worse. Why are we seeing more litter on our streets, and what can be done about it?

#litter #streets #towns #cities
It is true that
people
 throw their
waste
 here and there on our streets which is why
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is
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 facing
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 situation. It occurs for a variety of reasons which can be tackled by adopting some steps. There are a number of reasons why individuals throw their litter on the streets. One possible reason is that
people
 are not conscious about the environment because
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wastage
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 which they throw
such
 as plastics, vegetables and
fruits
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waste
, packets and so on , these are polluted our air, water and soil.
For example
, plastic is not easily mixed in the soil and it emits gasses which are not good for the air and the public. Another reason is that
,
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government
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 is not put any rules and regulations.
Therefore
,
people
 like to keep their unnecessary things on the street and
the
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towns and cities are getting worse day by day.
For instance
, India is stood
at
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 1st position in the pollution
lists
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 because the country is not clean and tidy.
However
, these problems can be solved by taking some actions.
To begin
 with,
public
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the public
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have
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 to
aware
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about
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the
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natural safety.
For
this
 reason, many
organisation
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organisations
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 should establish which will help to teach
the
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people
 about recycling and
keep
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 litter
at
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 the right place.
For example
, In Bangalore Brack institution takes the steps about
plastics
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 and glasses recycling process and teaches about it.
Besides
 , the institution
also
 put the dustbin
every
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 road and area. What is
more
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 the authorities have to make some laws about
the
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waste
 and have to
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be strick
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strick
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strict
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 about it. If
government
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the government
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 do it,
people
 will not throw the
waste
 on the street
due to
 the punishment. To illustrate, if any
people
 throw their litter on the road
instead
 of
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, the administration should charge on them. In conclusion,
people
 have to
aware
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about
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 the reaction of throwing unnecessary things
as well as
 government
have
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 to focus on it unless cities and
environment
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 will get damaged and the country will turn into
as
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a polluted country.
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