Some high school students work part-time in addition to going to school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of high school students having part-time jobs? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Getting a job has become more competitive than it has ever been. Many try to get a job even when they are in high
school
and are willing to
work
as they study. In
this
essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
students
working part-time jobs.
Students
that opt to
work
while
studying gain invaluable experience.
School
or university help us learn skills that are beneficial for a better life but they only teach so much. How to apply them is something that can be
obly
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only
taught in the real world. A student learning going to culinary
school
,
for instance
, can learn how to cook food but won't learn how to perform the same task in a restaurant, where they have to serve many in a short amount of time, something that can only be done so at
such
an establishment.
Furthermore
,
students
are able to earn money and live independently. They can fund their expensive college degrees without having to borrow
large
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sum of funds. Gaining knowledge
that is
fundamental to
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their jobs is critical for many.
However
,
students
that
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work
are
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overburdened. Not only do they have to spend hours on their
school
work
, they are now being forced to split their day at tedious jobs.
This
duress leads to mental and physical exhaustion.
For example
, a student who is studying to become a nurse working at a completely unrelated job just creates pressure and doesn't really teach anything relevant to their field of education.
Consequently
,
this
impacts both their academic life and
work
life. Which
further
leads to a feeling of tiredness and
happines-deprivation
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happiness-deprivation
. In conclusion, working part-time is a choice many
students
make for a variety of reasons.
However
, they should first focus on their studies as it is their priority.
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