Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report fo a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

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the maps

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the changes that happen in the

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of Chorleywood between 1868 and 1994.

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, the

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shows us Four changes. The first one is Main Road, and the second one is Motorway and the Railway.

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, every change includes its date.

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, the Chorleywood Park and Golf Course were built in 1868-1883

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the northeast and , southeast, Motorways

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was added in 1970.

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, the area behind the Railway and the Main Road

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was added in 1970-1994. As we see, gives us a Beautiful View from the Top.

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the Main Road and the Railway were constructed very well, gives to the habitants suitable facilities for circulation even there is a traffic jam.

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, in the southwest there is a new grey area was Built between 1922-1970,

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the Chorleywood

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had been expanded for the nation of

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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154 words

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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report fo a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

In many countries, women are able to join armed forces just as men. Some people say that only men should be members of the army, navy and air Force. Do you agree or disagree

Some people believe that one on one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are more effective

Today children spend a lot of their free time watching TV. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this practice? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are a lot of people traveling abroad for fun and pleasure these days.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it Write at least 150 words.