Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report fo a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

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the maps

illustrates

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the changes that happen in the

Village

of Chorleywood between 1868 and 1994.

Overall

, the

Village

shows us Four changes. The first one is Main Road, and the second one is Motorway and the Railway.

In addition

, every change includes its date.

On the other hand

, the Chorleywood Park and Golf Course were built in 1868-1883

while

the northeast and , southeast, Motorways

also

was added in 1970.

Furthermore

, the area behind the Railway and the Main Road

as well as

was added in 1970-1994. As we see, gives us a Beautiful View from the Top.

whereas

the Main Road and the Railway were constructed very well, gives to the habitants suitable facilities for circulation even there is a traffic jam.

hence

, in the southwest there is a new grey area was Built between 1922-1970,

It is clear that

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the Chorleywood

Village

had been expanded for the nation of

this

village

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