Euthanasia, which is legal in a few countries of the world, has the increasing number of supporters. Some people think it should be legalized worldwide. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the
21th
Change the ending
21st
show examples
century
Add a comma
,century
show examples
legalisation of
euthanasia
became a matter of serious concern. I would like to agree with the opinion that
euthanasia
should be legal and accessible for everyone. First of all, I believe that
euthanasia
may help to reveal the suffering of seriously ill patients. Sometimes situations may be hopeless, but a person has to go through all the pain, even though he has no chance of recovery. If
euthanasia
would be legal, doctors could have easily stopped the patient's pain, despite the fact he is going to die. Even more,
this
is not only about the patient, but
also
his family. It is very hard to watch how your relatives suffer when you can not do anything. That’s why it’s important to give
people
an opportunity to stop suffering
Moreover
, in some countries, medicine is very expensive and relatives could not afford to pay for treatment in a hospital.
In other words
, when a patient is going to die anyway, but
euthanasia
is prohibited, he has to lay in hospital for months or years, when his family pays for it.
For example
, in the United States medicine is very high-priced and, in some cases,
people
, even if they are ready for the death of their ill member, have to pay thousands of dollars.
Thus
,
euthanasia
in many cases may help
people
financially.
To conclude
, I strongly believe that
euthanasia
should be legal in all modern countries
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
because it helps
people
to get rid of necessary pain and expense.
Submitted by glebpopov5555 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: