Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In many
countries
, doctors
and engineers
are perceived as one
of the most critical jobs
. While
other
argue that experts like Fix the agreement mistake
others
doctors
and engineers
should be obligated to do their jobs
in their respective training countries
, I side with those who feel that they should be able to choose their job allocations based on personal decision
.
On the Fix the agreement mistake
decisions
one
hand, requirements to continue the jobs
in the same countries
after training might create positive outcomes. Firstly
, countries
have different systems and regulations, therefore
it is arguably essential to have experts with familiarities. The training for doctors
and engineers
is mostly conducted for more than one
year as they have to learn how to do their jobs
properly. This
means that during the process they are not only adapting and adjusting,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
observing the characteristics of their assigned countries
. As a
result
, they will most likely understand how to tackle issues and problems related to their fields through real life
learning Add a hyphen
real-life
experience
.
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experiences
On the other hand
, despite the positive outcomes, I would argue that they should have freedom
to choose based on two reasons. Add an article
the freedom
Firstly
, family
should be the Add an article
the family
a family
upmost
consideration as it can motivate these professionals Correct your spelling
utmost
while
doing their job. Consequently
, the regulation might result
in separating them with
their families, which can potentially lead to dissatisfaction. It is probable that they will find it difficult to do their daily Change preposition
from
jobs
because they have to stay away from their loved one
, which negatively impact
Change the verb form
impacts
the
job performance. Change the word
their
Secondly
, although
they are experts, they still have personal matters such
as passions, ambitions, and career plans. To illustrate, a high
qualified doctor might consider Replace the word
highly
to continue
their Change the verb form
continuing
educations
to pursue Fix the agreement mistake
education
doctoral
degree in the most prominent university in the world. The obligation to work in a specific country will harm their intention because Add an article
a doctoral
such
education is available in The United States of America or The United Kingdom. As a
result
, staying in the countries
from their trainings
might destroy their plan because they Change the wording
training
pieces of training
initially
want to settle in the countries
with the best education system that can fulfil their interest.
In conclusion, the regulation to stay after trainings
for Change the wording
training
pieces of training
doctors
and engineers
could result
in a better understanding to tackle their jobs
effectively due to
familiarities
. Fix the agreement mistake
familiarity
However
, I stand with the arguments that they should have options because of families and the personal intention to pursue something bigger with their careers.Submitted by ritanurhasanah36 on
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