The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

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sugar

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is produced from

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canes

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.

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, it can be divided into three main stages, which are harvesting, purifying and drying. At

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it takes 12 to 18 months for

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canes

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to mature

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the farm. After that, those matured

suger

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sugar

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are able to be harvested neither manually

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mechanically.

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the second stage of the process, those collected crops are sent into the

grind

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machine to produce juice by crushing and squeezing them.

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the juice derived from

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canes

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will be purified by the limestone filter. What's more, after

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in the evaporator, the purified juice becomes syrup that we need.

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we will use the centrifuge to separate

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crystals from syrup to get rid of those unnecessary elements.

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, with the drying and cooling procedures,

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syrup becomes

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in a container.