The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table gives information about the annual
milk
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production in the
Netherlands
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, Australia,
Tanzania
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and
Guatemala
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in 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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, it can be noted that
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Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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produces most of the
milk
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in all three years,
while
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Guatemala
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is at the bottom of the list with the least
milk
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production. The
Netherlands
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and Australia had almost an equal amount of
milk
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which was more than 11 million
litres
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each in both 1990 and 2000.
However
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, a sharp decline can be seen in Australia during 2010 where about 9,165,000
litres
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of
milk
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output was reported.
Whereas
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, the output increased for the
Netherlands
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with 11,466,000
litres
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of
milk
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. Turning to
Tanzania
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and
Guatemala
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, which were the least producers of
milk
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,
Tanzania
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still had 87,000
litres
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of
milk
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while
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Guatemala
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only yielded 26,000
litres
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of
milk
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in 1990. As,
Tanzania
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showed a huge progress in the
milk
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output in 2000 with 1,42,000
litres
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,
Guatemala
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only yielded 55,000
litres
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.
Furthermore
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,
Tanzania
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still had 1,55,000
litres
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of
milk
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while
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Guatemala
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merely reached 84,000
litres
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in 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, netherlands, tanzania, guatemala, litres with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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