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Band 6.5

Online news is not a reliable source of the truth; we should only trust recognised journalists. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#news #source #truth #trust #journalists
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Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common for
people
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 to read online
news
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. Online
news
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 is one of the most popular sources to gain
information
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.
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, much
information
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 on online
news
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 is an unreliable source of the truth. I firmly agree that
people
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 should only trust recognized journalists for two main reasons. The main reason is the
internet
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 is accessible. Everyone can write and post anything on the
internet
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 easily. By having
this
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 accessibility,
people
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 can be hard to filter trusted
information
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. For illustration,
a
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news
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 about a person that can heal
people
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 easily by using stone, called
ponari
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part
, had been spreading easily around 2010 on the
internet
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. In fact,
this
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 boy could not heal
people
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 with his stone.
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, it makes
people
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 waste their time and money to meet
this
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 boy.
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,
this
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 kind of hoax can be easily founded on
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internet
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. The following reason is wrong
data
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. The
Internet
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 can serve
information
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 for only about 10 seconds. It makes many
people
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 can get the
information
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 quickly.
However
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, the speed of uploading the
data
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 can make mistakes.
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, online
news
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 announced quickly based on the
data
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 that they gained that the winner of the election 2018 was A and B.
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, the real results had not been announced by the government.
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,
people
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 who got the wrong
information
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 celebrated earlier and got shame
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 that.
To sum up
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, online
news
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 is one of the easiest ways to get the
information
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.
However
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, easy access to the
internet
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 can spread hoaxes.
People
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also
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 can not rely on the quick
data
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 that serve by the
internet
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. I am totally convinced that
people
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 should trust recognized journalists in order to get
the
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information
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.
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