Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?

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of human efforts, almost everything seems to have changed, from social values to how humans behave. Of course, not everyone is accepting of the changes that have occurred and

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has led to disputes in certain circumstances. Yes, nothing is more controversial than offspring spending

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playing those

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of enjoying outdoor

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, the younger generation's behaviour has often surfaced as an issue of great consequence to our lives.

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, there is a need to discuss the causes that led to these changes and the effects the changes have brought. The first main cause of the parents do not get enough

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to take their child to visit playgrounds Like many aspects of life kids spend a lot of

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playing computer

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more than

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has been highly influenced by It is quite difficult to determine how long...........will continuously affect....offspring spending

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playing those

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of enjoying outdoor

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.....but it is certain that the future of ...offspring spending

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playing those

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of enjoying outdoor

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, we cannot ignore.........as another important element, as in many respects it is

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strongly connected with...offspring spending

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playing those

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of enjoying outdoor

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, there are many aspects to consider, but I think what is the most important is that everyone works together.

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,........should be proactive in searching for solutions to problems and

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should have a new attitude

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different to the way they tried to solve the

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in the past. Of course,

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way may not always lead to a successful result, but as

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progresses, it surely will in part contribute to resolving......

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,........

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can help to solve the

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of ...offspring spending

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playing those

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of enjoying outdoor

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....as....... is directly and indirectly associated with the

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and I believe that those concerned are more likely to see the

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from a broader perspective and bring more realistic solutions to the table. In conclusion, has been caused by various factors. I strongly believe that the achievable ways to solve

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include parents needing to spend more

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with their children and finding activities outdoor for them.