Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Some young people take a long
time
each day on their mobile phones. This
is because there are many attractive videos
on various platforms, but they can have adverse consequences because they can have less family time
. This
essay believes that negative development has more effects than positive.
Youngsters love using mobile gadgets because streaming platforms have a variety of entertaining videos
. This
means that they have timeless opportunities to enjoy themselves, and they can spend endless hours consuming new videos
without breaking
. Correct pronoun usage
thembreaking
For example
, program shows of a series of Marvel's heroes on Disney Plus, those design titles or thumbnails by timeline sequences to entice children to click on more videos
. As a result
, they spend more pass time
on a screen instead
of being outside doing real life
activities, Add a hyphen
real-life
such
as playing sports or socializing with friends.
Despite the streaming services being highly enjoyable for children, the adverse effects should be considered because they have limited time
with family and friends. Being around with father and mother teaches them many important things, such
as value
, manners, Fix the agreement mistake
values
or
how to treat others. Correct word choice
and
Similarly
, time
sharing with friends encourages them to practice their social skills. If a child misses these opportunities they can grow up with impaired manners and probably adopt inappropriate behaviors
from influencers or content that they consumed Change the spelling
behaviours
from
online rather than their parents. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, many planking videos
of influencers on YouTube are easy to imitate and most likely to promote their violence.
In conclusion, videos
on smartphones may be irresistible to those under 18. Nevertheless
, parents should restrict their screen time
as much as possible to limit the harmful effects that are able to influence their upbringing.Submitted by bhawatr on
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