Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

Some people believe that

success

is equivalent to the level of

someone’s

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,

whereas

others argue

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should be considered. In my view, the latter views should stand and I will elaborate

further

in the next paragraph. On one hand, it is widely believed that a

success

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person tends to possess a higher level of

intelligence

because they

usually

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well-qualified

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their chosen field.

For instance

, successful engineers

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without a doubt have skills in maths,

statistics

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and statistics

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, and understand theoretical frameworks.

Consequently

, career achievements, to some

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, can potentially measure their brains as the jobs require complex technical understanding.

On the other hand

, I would argue that

success

should not be the only measure to

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someone’s

intelligence

.

Firstly

, the definition of

success

is subjective, some prefer to climb the ladder in their jobs to be an accomplished person,

while

others might choose to focus more on giving back to communities.

For example

, a graduate student from a prestigious university with a high IQ decided to work in remote areas as a teacher with

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income.

In other words

, it is difficult to answer whether or not someone is smart only through the level of their

success

, considering the definition of

success

in itself sounds blurry.

Secondly

, intellectual is not only about maths and numbers

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but

also

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includes

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emotional

intelligence

.

This

means that it reflects how a person responds to problems, communicates with other people, and handles anger and frustrations.

As a result

,

someone’s

intellect can be measured by their character and personality. In conclusion,

success

could potentially measure

someone’s

brain because it usually reflects qualifications which include some elements of

intelligence

.

However

, I believe that

success

is a vague concept, and characters and personalities

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a reflection of emotional

intelligence

.