You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the
two
different architectural schemes of the existing ground floor of a
house
. In the following paragraphs, I will first introduce the designer's ideas about the proposed plan and compare
two
different schemes . In the original design, there is a hall in the middle of the kitchen and living
room
separating
two
areas by
two
internal walls. Talking to the position of doors, the entrance doors are located on the front side and back sides of the
house
, and the stairs to the second floor are just attached to the internal wall of the living
room
. Compare to the original plan, the proposed changes take off the hall setting and the internal wall of the living
room
, making it an open area for the guest.
In addition
to the living
room
, the internal wall still separates the kitchen individually,
moreover
, renovate it with new furniture.
Finally
, the stairs are relocated to the back side of the
house
.
Overall
, the proposed design of the ground floor of the
house
spares more space and refurnishes the
house
.
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