Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondry school.do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantage?

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Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondry school.do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantage?

Fully explain your ideas

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects, others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both of these views and provide your opinion

Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.