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The provided table illustrates the milk production in a year in four countries (Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, Guatemala) in 1990, 2000 and 2010

The provided table illustrates the milk production in a year in four countries (Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, Guatemala) in 1990, 2000 and 2010
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The provided table illustrates the
milk
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 production in a year in four countries (Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, Guatemala) in 1990, 2000 and 2010. The
amount
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 of
milk
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 counted in
litres
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. At the onset,
it is clear that
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 the highest
amount
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 of
milk
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, over the years, was produced by the Netherlands, and the lowest
amount
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 was produced by Guatemala. Eventually, the Netherlands produced the maximum
amount
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 of
milk
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 through the years from 11.262.000
litres
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 in 1990 to 11.466.000
litres
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 in 2010, with a slight fluctuation to 11.155.000
litres
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 in 2000.
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, Tanzania and Guatemala showed a growing tendency from 87.000 in 1990 to 1.55.000
litres
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 in 2010 and 26.000
litres
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 in 1990 to 84.000
litres
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 in 2020 perspectively. Australia’s
milk
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 production,
otherwise
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, went down from 11.246.000
litres
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 in 1990 to 9.165.000
litres
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 in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, amount, litres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "provided" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • milk production
  • trends
  • economic development
  • growth rates
  • leading producer
  • technological advancements
  • policy changes
  • climatic conditions
  • global impact
  • dairy industry
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