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in some countries,more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exersice classses what are the reasons for this? is this a positive or negative development?

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Gyms and muscle training issues arising from increased knowledge about their bodies and their needs are of
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great concern nowadays. Recently, it is thought that exercising in private with a professional guide helps more and must be taken into consideration rather than training in groups. in my opinion, I certainly believe that private class is a must and is of great benefit than other options. In
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 I will elaborate more on
this
. to start with, many
people
 who wanted to get in shape or strengthen their bodies may injure themselves
while
 they are alone.
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 it is fun when you are doing exercise with a lot of
people
 and friends around you, you might find focus from
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' as he or she is focusing on a larger number of
people
.
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, exercising in a group will not help you know in
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 how you could schedule your own exercise plan
according to
 your needs.
therefore
 , you will reach your goal slower.
on the other hand
, having personal direct guidance will help you reach your goal faster.
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, the full training time will focus on
this
 target, making it easier and more reachable.
Furthermore
, it is easier to put classes in between busy schedules.
for instance
, it is easier to find a suitable time for both you and a trainer than for a group of
people
.
To conclude
,
due to
 the aforementioned reasons, we may conclude that the benefits of having focused guided on you during exercise overweight the disadvantages of not considering it.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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