You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved

Dear Sir or Madam My name is SABER Youcef and I am a regular customer at our college cafeteria What I like most about it is the variety of menus that you present to your clients
as well as
the quality of dessert that you provide,
in addition
, I have to mention the discount that you propose
at the end
month for your faithful clients.
Although
most of your services are excellent, I have to draw your attention to the lack of labour at the weekends,
as a result
, we have to wait for quite some time for our order to be served,
for instance
,
last
weekend, I had to wait for 30 minutes for a cup of coffee and a piece of cake. A good solution would be to recruit new part-time employees, you can even make an announcement here in college, I am sure that plenty of students would be interested in taking that occupation,
this
will surely improve your services. Please give
this
matter your immediate attention Yours faithfully SABER Youcef
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