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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and Allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

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These
worlds
 are so fortunate to have all they want and ever request by some
parents
 which is not a good
method
 of bringing up our world,
however
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this
method
 of nurturing these
worlds
 adopted by some
parents
 could lead to maladjustments in the
future
. There is an adage that says, as you lay your bed, so you will lie on it. Meaning it is the way you train your world
that is
 what they will grow up to be. A child you never train to struggle to meet up for his/her want will never know how to struggle to do that for themselves in the
future
. They never experience lack, so how do they want to copy when things are hard with their
parents
 or when they are not rich as their
parents
.
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 These children will always depend on them at all times because all they want or request are always met by their
parents
.
However
,
this
 nurturing
method
 adopted by some
parents
 leads to maladjustments in which these
worlds
 would not be able to cope with any situations they find themselves in the
future
 without
parents
 or someone's intervention because they have been trained to always depend on people for their want. Sometimes in the
,
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subsequent if their want is not met, some of these
worlds
 will go to the extent of stealing because it's difficult for them to meet what they want. They can never appreciate the lack because they never experience it. They see
parents
 who couldn't provide for their
worlds
 as irresponsible
parents
. In conclusion, the
method
 of nurturing
this
 world adopted by some
parents
 by providing all they want and the request is never a good
method
 and could lead to maladjustments in the
future
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • indulgent
  • entitlement
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • nurturing
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  • adversity
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