Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and Allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

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These
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are so fortunate to have all they want and ever request by some
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which is not a good
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of bringing up our world,
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this
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method
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of nurturing these
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adopted by some
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could lead to maladjustments in the
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. There is an adage that says, as you lay your bed, so you will lie on it. Meaning it is the way you train your world
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what they will grow up to be. A child you never train to struggle to meet up for his/her want will never know how to struggle to do that for themselves in the
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. They never experience lack, so how do they want to copy when things are hard with their
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or when they are not rich as their
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These children will always depend on them at all times because all they want or request are always met by their
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.
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,
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nurturing
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adopted by some
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leads to maladjustments in which these
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would not be able to cope with any situations they find themselves in the
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without
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or someone's intervention because they have been trained to always depend on people for their want. Sometimes in the
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subsequent if their want is not met, some of these
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will go to the extent of stealing because it's difficult for them to meet what they want. They can never appreciate the lack because they never experience it. They see
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who couldn't provide for their
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as irresponsible
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. In conclusion, the
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of nurturing
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world adopted by some
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by providing all they want and the request is never a good
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and could lead to maladjustments in the
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • indulgent
  • entitlement
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • nurturing
  • self-reliance
  • adversity
  • autonomy
  • validation
  • dependence
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