You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

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Dear Rohit, I am glad to know that

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you have decided to get driving classes.

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, I am writing

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letter to let you know about some benefits of having a licence and some other important information regarding your classes. As you know, in

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fast-paced life, it is very important to be independent. Your parents can't do drop-off duty for your whole life. Now,

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is the perfect time to drive on your own.

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, you can save time you spend waiting for buses or daily bus fares. Better to get your own car. Make a long-term asset. In fact, I have mentioned some of the well-known driving schools in our area. Those schools are Rebel Driving, New Comer and 5 Star driving school. All of them are certified by the regulated authority. Well, I would like to give you some extra advice. Make sure to get sunglasses as it is too sunny

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sun glare will hit your eyes, wear shoes not slippers

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your class. I hope

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information will find you worthwhile. Best of Luck, Your Loving Heena Chadda

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

184 words

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The Closing

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