You have a recently started work in a new company Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your news job tell him her your other news

Hi Maria, I hope everything is going well, is your mum feeling better?

Last

week when we talked, you told me your mother was sick, I live really close to her house so anything she needs just tell her to call me. About ,me I have good news to share with you. As you already know, I have been seeking another job. I was so tired of working so many long shifts, having

such

bad pay and having to design always pretty much the same. It has been so tricky having to work in a place I was not feeling happy anymore. Suddenly I received a call from the brand Billabong, they were looking for a graphic designer for the new office that has just been built in the Coolangatta suburb. Today in the morning I had an interview with the manager and

then

a practice trial and I got the job! The payment they offered me is much more than what I was expecting. I am so happy, the manager told me I was all that they were looking for. They want me to design new bikinis and swimsuits. I start creating some new designers for that, can’t wait to show you! By the way, I was planning to make dinner on Thursday. My brother arrived yesterday. He is planning to stay over two weeks and

then

he is flying back to Spain. Would be amazing if you can come and join us. Hope to you see you soon, All my love, Jim

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

254 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have a recently started work in a new company Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your news job tell him her your other news

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Nowadays most people read books online and there is decline in number of people reading paperback books. What are the advantages and disadvantages

People in the limelight have a responsibility to set an example for others by their good behaviour. Do you agree?

Now adays the population of young people is more than old people in the countries. And it benefit us To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each crime. others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.