You have a recently started work in a new company Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your news job tell him her your other news

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Hi Maria, I hope everything is going well, is your mum feeling better?

Last

week when we talked, you told me your mother was sick, I live really close to her house so anything she needs just tell her to call me. About ,me I have good news to share with you. As you already know, I have been seeking another job. I was so tired of working so many long shifts, having

such

bad pay and having to design always pretty much the same. It has been so tricky having to work in a place I was not feeling happy anymore. Suddenly I received a call from the brand Billabong, they were looking for a graphic designer for the new office that has just been built in the Coolangatta suburb. Today in the morning I had an interview with the manager and

then

a practice trial and I got the job! The payment they offered me is much more than what I was expecting. I am so happy, the manager told me I was all that they were looking for. They want me to design new bikinis and swimsuits. I start creating some new designers for that, can’t wait to show you! By the way, I was planning to make dinner on Thursday. My brother arrived yesterday. He is planning to stay over two weeks and

then

he is flying back to Spain. Would be amazing if you can come and join us. Hope to you see you soon, All my love, Jim

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

254 words

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