The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram displays how to produce
chocolate
.
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Overall
, there are ten steps to producing Linking Words
chocolate
, and there are five main steps: growing, harvesting, mechanical and chemical process, and producing.
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To begin
with, Linking Words
chocolate
is planted and grown in South America, Africa, and Indonesia. Use synonyms
Chocolate
trees have some branches with green leaves, the fruit is green when it is unripe and becomes dark when it starts to ripen. Use synonyms
Second,
after the fruits are ripe and ready to harvest, it opens with a sharp knife to get out all the white cocoa Linking Words
beans
. Use synonyms
Third,
Linking Words
beans
are fermented and covered with banana leaves. The next stage is finished with fermentation, the Use synonyms
beans
are spread in the sun to dry. Use synonyms
Moreover
, after the been is dry enough, put the Linking Words
beans
in large sacks, and need to be weighed. Before taking them to the factory to the next stages, the Use synonyms
beans
are delivered by big trucks or a train. In the factory, Use synonyms
beans
are roasted in a hot container at 360 celsius degrees. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
beans
are crushed to separate from the outer shell with a rounded container. The Use synonyms
last
step is pressed; the Linking Words
beans
are crushed to get the final product, Use synonyms
a liquid
Remove the article
liquid chocolate
a bar of liquid chocolate
chocolate
.Use synonyms
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