The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram displays how to produce
chocolate
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Overall
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, there are ten steps to producing
chocolate
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, and there are five main steps: growing, harvesting, mechanical and chemical process, and producing.
To begin
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with,
chocolate
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is planted and grown in South America, Africa, and Indonesia.
Chocolate
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trees have some branches with green leaves, the fruit is green when it is unripe and becomes dark when it starts to ripen.
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after the fruits are ripe and ready to harvest, it opens with a sharp knife to get out all the white cocoa
beans
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Third,
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beans
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are fermented and covered with banana leaves. The next stage is finished with fermentation, the
beans
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are spread in the sun to dry.
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, after the been is dry enough, put the
beans
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in large sacks, and need to be weighed. Before taking them to the factory to the next stages, the
beans
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are delivered by big trucks or a train. In the factory,
beans
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are roasted in a hot container at 360 celsius degrees.
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,
beans
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are crushed to separate from the outer shell with a rounded container. The
last
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step is pressed; the
beans
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are crushed to get the final product,
a liquid
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liquid chocolate
a bar of liquid chocolate
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chocolate
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chocolate, beans with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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