You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words

Various controversies have emerged as to whether

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at home or

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to

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is best for children's future development. In the following paragraphs, I will introduce the benefits of both

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,

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and elaborate on my point of

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about

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issue. Going to

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are

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recognise

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as

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important step

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socialization

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. By making friends and socializing with different kinds of people

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as teachers and

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classmates

,

students

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can learn how to interact with people. Without the process of

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,

students

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may face conflicts with boss or communication problems with colleagues.

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,

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is one of the most important factors during the growing process of

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children

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.

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but not least, teachers, professors and education resources from

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school

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especially in

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education system are imperative in studying.

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to going to

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, teaching children at home is proven to be more efficient than going to

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school

. Parents can design the

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program especially for their kids taking the best care of their

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.

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, different from

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schedule

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like

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, studying at home gives

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more flexible times to

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and touch what they are interested

or

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in or

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specialize in. In my point of view, I consider educated in

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is

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a better choice for children. Take my personal experience

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, almost

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entire

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progresses of me are developed in

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,

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as joining a club, attending an exchange program and being a leader of my class.

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,

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the

resarch

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research

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relationship

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relationships

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and

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with people is not only important for

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but

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for

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growing

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.

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, as a college student, the resources that

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gives me

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a

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indispensible

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indispensable

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my

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.

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, I think

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to

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is definitely a better choice for

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students

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future development.