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Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in the society, while others think that individuals can have alot of influence. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays, the majority of individuals feel that it is the sole responsibility of the
people
 in power to make a developmental difference in society,
although
 others think that a wide range of progress can be made by some
people
. In my opinion, I think
people
 can develop their continents,
this
 is because they have the skills and with ,co-operation they can go a long way.
This
 essay will explain my viewpoints with a logical conclusion.
To begin
,
people
 can make an important innovation in their various places of residence,
this
 is owing to the fact that they have the artistry and wisdom to do
also
, moreso they know different areas which they think they need to improve upon and how that, in turn, affects their lives.
For example
, the community in Mowe in Australia used their initiative to develop a cold room where sea products are preserved freely, with these the local farmers are able to export see foods without the fear of spoilage.
Furthermore
, it is observed that when a crowd come together to achieve a goal it usually comes out to be successful, so
therefore
 with co-operation
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they can reform roads, and bridges, and
also
 inculcate laws and punishment for whosoever refuses to abide.
Hence
, it is seen that the population have a lot of ability to improve their state
However
, when a political party is in charge of a country they may have good intentions which can be ruined by bad leaders,
thus
 making
such
 an excellent idea become destroyed.
For instance
, in ,Malawi the construction of the international airport was halted by the minister of finance because he fled with the money for the project leaving members of the public to their fate.
Therefore
, it is seen that it is not only the authority that can modify the environment. In conclusion, when human beings take up an idea without the help of the state they actualize it, since they have the knowledge and spirit of togetherness, unlike the ministry which is made up of selfish leaders.
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