You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

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Dear John, It has been

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a long time since we spoke, I hope

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letter finds you well and in good health. I have got a new job in Abu Dhabi and I moved into my new accommodation

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week. It is a one-bedroom apartment with an open kitchen and one bathroom. The best feature about the house is, it has a spacious area and has a fireplace too.

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, the neighbourhood is very friendly and helpful. The house is mostly occupied by working couples and singles. Weekly gatherings are organized every weekend by the community and I am looking to join the one that will be held

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Sunday.

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, I am organising a housewarming party in two weeks and I would like to have your presence. Please bring your family

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you. I am excited to show you both around the house. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Suman

bsuman402Mon May 01 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

155 words

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You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

Large numbers of people participate in sports that are extremely dangerous. Why do you think people do this? How can the risks of participation be minimised?

In some countries, many people suffer from health problems due to eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both veiws and give your opinion?

Several cities around the globe subscribed the idea of vertical development for residential buildings, others promtote independent houses in larger areas.

Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some people think that activities are not good for a child's mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?