You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

Dear John, It has been

such

a long time since we spoke, I hope

this

letter finds you well and in good health. I have got a new job in Abu Dhabi and I moved into my new accommodation

last

week. It is a one-bedroom apartment with an open kitchen and one bathroom. The best feature about the house is, it has a spacious area and has a fireplace too.

In addition

, the neighbourhood is very friendly and helpful. The house is mostly occupied by working couples and singles. Weekly gatherings are organized every weekend by the community and I am looking to join the one that will be held

this

Sunday.

Furthermore

, I am organising a housewarming party in two weeks and I would like to have your presence. Please bring your family

along with

you. I am excited to show you both around the house. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Suman

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