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The graph shows information about the use o public transport in one country, by age group and location of recidence

The graph shows information about the use o public transport in one country, by age group and location of recidence
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The line graph illustrates the difference in the utilization of public transportation in a particular country,
according to
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 the
age
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 groups and addresses, in 2016.
overall
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, the proportion of transport used in large cities is greater for all ages except the
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 group between 61 to 75 in comparison with other residents. Broader, cities utilization of cars by the young generation between 0 to 15 is 40 per
cent
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. It can be seen in the graph that the proportion increases till the
age
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 group of 31 and 45,
moreover
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, the highest percentages of users of public transport belonged to
this
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age
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 group.
In contrast
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, in other smaller ,cities the percentages of the same
age
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 groups are considerably less, ages between o-15 had about 15 per
cent
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, 16 to 30 more than 25 per
cent
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 and between 31 to 45 had about 15 per
cent
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 public transport utilization.
Furthermore
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, in large ,towns 46 to had slightly more than 40 per
cent
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 use and among people 61 and 75 years old had significantly few proportions (near to 10%).
Whereas
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, people of other residents had a steady fluctuation in the same
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 groups, about 15 per
cent
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 to about 19 per
cent
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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