Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

In the modern

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people face

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of issues related to

environment

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. Developed countries have created many environmental

problems

in the world, particularly in their contribution to global warming.

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essay analyses the

problems

and solutions

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global warming. My point of view

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in the following paragraph.

To begin

with,the

problems

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problem

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of global warming is that

firstly

, nowadays the

temperature

is increasing day-by-day it leads to melt the ice cap and increase the

water

level in

sea

.

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, the NASSA is predicted that the level of

water

in

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increase by 23

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it

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take

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many

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free

land

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near

to

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the

sea

.

Moreover

, a few animals lose their habitats

such

as polar

bear

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bears

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because of melting ice.

Furthermore

, the rising

temperature

affect not only the animals but

also

,

effect

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the human. To be clearer, the increasing

temperature

reduce

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the amount of fresh

water

in the world

it

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results

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to

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war between people for drinking

water

.

In addition

, folks can not live in the society because of high humidity. There are some

solution

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solutions

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to prevent

the

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global warming first and foremost one is that, carbon emission is the main reason for increasing

temperature

if the authorities promote

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eco friendly

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vehicles

such

as electric

car

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and

bicycle

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it help to control

amount

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the amount

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of carbon in

atmosphere

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the atmosphere

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and reduce

temperature

.

Secondly

, the government

introduce

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strict rules and regulations to control the amount of carbon.

Lastly

, give awareness

class

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to the people about

consequences

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the consequences

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of global warming and promote afforestation.

To sum up

, global warming leads to

may

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problems

in the world

such

as increasing

sea

level

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levels

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and reducing fresh

water

, which can be tackled by

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awareness

class

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classes

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to

the

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folks and

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strict rules and regulations.