Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?
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the environment
problems
in the world, particularly in their contribution to global warming. This
essay analyses the problems
and solutions of
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To begin
with,the problems
of global warming is that Fix the agreement mistake
problem
firstly
, nowadays the temperature
is increasing day-by-day it leads to melt the ice cap and increase the water
level in sea
. For example
, the NASSA is predicted that the level of water
in sea
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the sea
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sea
. Moreover
, a few animals lose their habitats such
as polar bear
because of melting ice. Fix the agreement mistake
bears
Furthermore
, the rising temperature
affect not only the animals but also
, effect
the human. To be clearer, the increasing Correct your spelling
affect
temperature
reduce
the amount of fresh Change the verb form
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water
in the world it
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resulting
to
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water
. In addition
, folks can not live in the society because of high humidity.
There are some solution
to prevent Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
the
global warming first and foremost one is that, carbon emission is the main reason for increasing Correct article usage
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temperature
if the authorities promote the
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eco friendly
vehicles Add a hyphen
eco-friendly
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as electric car
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cars
bicycle
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the amount
atmosphere
and reduce Add an article
the atmosphere
temperature
. Secondly
, the government introduce
strict rules and regulations to control the amount of carbon. Change the form of the verb
introduced
Lastly
, give awareness class
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consequences
of global warming and promote afforestation.
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the consequences
To sum up
, global warming leads to may
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many
problems
in the world such
as increasing sea
level
and reducing fresh Fix the agreement mistake
levels
water
, which can be tackled by give
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implement
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