Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

In the modern
era
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people face
lot
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of issues related to
environment
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the environment
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. Developed countries have created many environmental
problems
in the world, particularly in their contribution to global warming.
This
essay analyses the
problems
and solutions
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global warming. My point of view
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in the following paragraph.
To begin
with,the
problems
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of global warming is that
firstly
, nowadays the
temperature
is increasing day-by-day it leads to melt the ice cap and increase the
water
level in
sea
.
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, the NASSA is predicted that the level of
water
in
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increase by 23
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it
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take
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many
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free
land
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near
to
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the
sea
.
Moreover
, a few animals lose their habitats
such
as polar
bear
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because of melting ice.
Furthermore
, the rising
temperature
affect not only the animals but
also
,
effect
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the human. To be clearer, the increasing
temperature
reduce
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the amount of fresh
water
in the world
it
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results
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to
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war between people for drinking
water
.
In addition
, folks can not live in the society because of high humidity. There are some
solution
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solutions
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to prevent
the
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global warming first and foremost one is that, carbon emission is the main reason for increasing
temperature
if the authorities promote
the
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eco friendly
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vehicles
such
as electric
car
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and
bicycle
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bicycles
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it help to control
amount
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of carbon in
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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and reduce
temperature
.
Secondly
, the government
introduce
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strict rules and regulations to control the amount of carbon.
Lastly
, give awareness
class
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to the people about
consequences
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the consequences
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of global warming and promote afforestation.
To sum up
, global warming leads to
may
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problems
in the world
such
as increasing
sea
level
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levels
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and reducing fresh
water
, which can be tackled by
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awareness
class
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classes
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to
the
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folks and
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strict rules and regulations.
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