Parents should teach children about the importance of money. Do you agree or disagree. Give your own reasons and include examples from your knowledge and experience.

Money

is vital in

this

society as it is served as the

basic

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to purchase goods. It is often argued that

parents

shouldn’t teach their children

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the importance of

money

as they are still young to understand.

However

, as to whether it is a blessing or curse, there arises a heated debate among people. As far as I’m concerned, I personally agree that these

skills

must be developed by children since they are young in order to be vigilant towards funds management in the future.

Firstly

, it is recommendable that

parents

can educate their

kids

by starting to expose their excruciating work moments towards the

kids

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to understand that the sources of

money

are not as easy as they have believed.

This

will develop a sense of appreciation towards the

money

and have the potential to avoid developing extravagant

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in the future.

Secondly

,

parents

always served

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an important role to guide their

kids

by advocating

them

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some

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certain ways to utilize the funds wisely.

For example

, it is worth mentioning that Asian

family

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families

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love

kids

to take responsibility

of

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their own expenses since they are young

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to adapt as a part of the basic surviving

skills

in the future. It is crucial for

kids

to develop funds management

skills

since they are young.

This

fortifies the fact that

,

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the management of wages

are

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one of the fundamental

skills

in

this

society.

This

not only will reduce the risk

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facing poverty but can

served

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as a safety net.

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,

a

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surgery required a tremendous amount of surgical fees;

thus

, it is a way better to save a part of the wage

as

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for emergency purposes because life is not going to take twice in

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reality.

Thus

,

this

lesson must be embedded into

kids

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kids'

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learning journey since they are still young. In conclusion,

according to

the arguments and examples given, I strongly believe that

parents

should educate their

kids

in terms of the importance of

money

since they were young in order to produce a wealthy society.