Students in university education should develop specialists in one subject area rather than create a broader range of subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that
instead
of disciplining students
as versatile, universities ought to improve them in a particular field in order to be experts. I mostly agree with this
suggestion, because many sectors in the
society need specialists and too Correct article usage
apply
much
subjects in university studies Change the quantifier
many
prevents
Correct subject-verb agreement
prevent
to understand
fundamental information in a certain branch.
Change the verb form
understanding
Firstly
, in recent years, demanding of experts has increased in the business life
because definition
of occupations has been changed and varied. Companies are seeking employees for their elaborate described positions rather than generalized job definitions. Add an article
the definition
For instance
, mechanical engineers could assume many responsibilities in factories which produce vehicles in the past. Now, many works have branched in favour of rapid production and sustainability such
as automotive engineers, industrial engineers and designers. Apart from
this
, many research and innovations can improve better with experts due to
their vast knowledge in particular
field
. Software developments can be counted as examples in Fix the agreement mistake
fields
this
case. Shortly, being specialist
is more precious than being versatile.
Add an article
a specialist
Secondly
, learning diversity of information does not mean a better education and studying broader
range of subjects may give negative effects Add an article
a broader
to
Change preposition
on
students
in their education. They may lose their focal points in their studies due to
abundance
of topics. Correct article usage
the abundance
In
the end of their education Change the preposition
At
life
, they may not be sure themselves
and forget their main aims. To illustrate that, many common subjects Change preposition
of themselves
such
as some history courses in science facilities are redundant and they forbid students
to focus their
main studies. Change preposition
on their
In addition
, these unnecessary courses may lead to extend
their school Change the verb form
extending
life
with a probable failure in examination
. Fix the agreement mistake
examinations
Thus
, universities opt to develop specialists rather than varied informed students
.
In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with this
suggestion. Although
,
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apply
graduated
with versatile information may present some opportunities to Wrong verb form
graduating
students
, in my opinion, expert graduates far
better for society Add a missing verb
are far
due to
their defined contributions in
work Change preposition
to
life
and their extract
knowledge. 57 dkReplace the word
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