The local Council in your city has no funds for repairs and maintanenance of old buildings. It has decided to demolish a historical building to build a software company. Write a letter to the head of Council. In your letter: explain why the building is important suggest how the building can be used to benefit the local community suggest a solution to finance the repairs.

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Dear sir, I am writing to inform you that I came to know about the recent decision by the local authorities to demolish the City Clock

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. I checked with my local officials about

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decision and they have informed me that

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due to

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insufficient funds for maintenance.

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, they have already sold

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property to the corporate for building a software company.

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was there for more than 300 years and it is one of the important

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of the city, it attracts more local and international visitors every year. The shops and hotels in the surrounding area are benefitted by the tourists and demolishing

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will greatly affect their life hood. I would suggest that we can able to collect funding by creating awareness campaigns in schools and colleges for

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maintenance.

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, we can bring some local artists every year to do some performance and the profit collected from

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can be given to the local authorities for repairs. I would appreciate your immediate attention on

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matter. Thanking you in advance. Yours faithfully, David

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
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for example
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

182 words

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