The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
The graph indicates different spending habits based on
age
, including food and drink; restaurants and hotels; and entertainment, in the UK in 2004.
Overall
, young people spent most of their money on eating out and travelling, while
elderly people were in favour of purchasing food and drink as well as
enjoying entertainment.
The amount of money spent on food and drink displayed and positive proportion with age
, which accounted for 20% of spending in the age
groups over 76 years
old, compared to 5% of those were
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years
old. On top of that, the figures regarding entertainment displayed an upward trend among participants who were younger than 75 years
old, at more than 20% as the highest in the age
group between 61 to 75 years
old.
On the other hand
, spending on restaurants and hotels took up the largest proportion in
young individuals, especially those who were under 30 Change preposition
of
years
old, they invested nearly 15% in such
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