Some people think that teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject they are best at or they are most interested in. Discuss bothe the views and give your opinion.

Certain people argue that minors should focus on all the parts of

curriculum

Add an article

the curriculum

show examples

at school

while

Linking Words

some

believing

Wrong verb form

believe

show examples

that youth should

also

Linking Words

be

centered

Change the spelling

centred

show examples

on

one

Use synonyms

subject

in

Change preposition

apply

show examples

which they like the most. In my opinion, having an idea of all parts included in the syllabus is important rather than only

one

Use synonyms

. The below paragraphs show both

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

views with examples. Academics in education are designed to have a basic idea of all the subjects so as to make them understand each concept. Eventually, when they decide about their professional career, they must have a basic thought about the subject and the concepts they are about to deal with.

For example

Linking Words

, even if

one

Use synonyms

student concentrates on science and

being

Wrong verb form

is

show examples

very passionate

becomes

Correct word choice

and becomes

show examples

a doctor, he or she should have

a minimum knowledge

Remove the article

minimum knowledge

a piece of minimum knowledge

show examples

on

Change preposition

of

show examples

the calculations part because when the medicines

ia

Correct your spelling

in

prescribed

then

Linking Words

every dosage is based on the milligrams per kg weight.

Hence

Linking Words

, both

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

subjects play a vital role in having better

outcome

Fix the agreement mistake

outcomes

show examples

and

skill

Fix the agreement mistake

skills

show examples

. Adolescents trained to have an eagle eye only on

one

Use synonyms

matter of the syllabus

makes

Correct subject-verb agreement

make

show examples

them more centralized in their achievement. They make a target very clear and

this

Linking Words

helps them to have a

smoot

Correct your spelling

smooth

show examples

cakewalk on

career

Add an article

the career

a career

show examples

they planned.

For instance

Linking Words

, a pupil showing more interest in research becomes a scientist and they have their road very clear ahead without any hurdles.

Thus

Linking Words

, it may or may not be successful sometimes but we have to guide them to have a little bit of idea on every concept. In my view, being a professional requires a whole lot of maturity in every area of knowledge so as to master every skill. In

this

Linking Words

era of competition, everyone is skilled in more than

one

Use synonyms

study.

Its

Replace the word

It's

It is

show examples

our own zeal sometimes that makes us learn

every thing

Correct your spelling

everything

show examples

that is

Linking Words

necessary.

Moreover

Linking Words

, if we start

this

Linking Words

self-preparation from our basics itself

then

Linking Words

it helps us find our deserved place more easily. To illustrate, business management is the study in which

one

Use synonyms

needs to have good communication skills and interpersonal relationships handled very perfectly. I follow with the view that all the subjects play a vital role to have a better way.

To conclude

Linking Words

,

focus

Wrong verb form

focusing

show examples

on various concepts make them more mature enough and compression on only

single

Correct article usage

a single

show examples

part is good but way challenging comparatively. They both have

they

Correct pronoun usage

their

show examples

respective benefits.