Your neighbor keeps his/her animal in the garden. Write to him/her about it and the inconvenience it causes you and your family. In your letter · tell what the problem is · explain why it causes inconvenience · suggest a possible solution to it · say what actions you might take if the need arises. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Mr Black, I am writing to bring to your attention an issue my family and I are facing

due to

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your

dog

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's presence. I would like to point out the problem which we have been facing.

Firstly

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, your

dog

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always barks when my daughter arrives at your home for tuition. She is fright

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the

dog

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, and she told me that she wants to change her tuition because of

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Moreover

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, your

dog

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was eating my

garden

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grass whenever you went

for

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jogging with it. The reason why your

dog

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makes inconvenience to us is that my daughter does not concentrate on her studies, so she thought she will be getting low scores

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due to

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this

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disturbance.

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, I will be planning to celebrate my wife's birthday in my

garden

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, but

due to

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your

dog

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's bad behaviour, I am not able to celebrate it in my

garden

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. To address

this

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issue, I will suggest some solutions.

Firstly

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, you could train your

dog

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when to bark, and where to bark, so that the other neighbours like me can live without any problem.

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, you should eat your

dog

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some delicious

animals'

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animals

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food.

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, I will not remake my

garden

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again. If you do not take

this

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matter

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serious

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I will call the head of the animal help department.

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, you can talk with him for

further

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process. I hope you understand our problems and look into

this

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matter as soon as possible. Best regards, Milav Soni

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

252 words

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