Your neighbor keeps his/her animal in the garden. Write to him/her about it and the inconvenience it causes you and your family. In your letter · tell what the problem is · explain why it causes inconvenience · suggest a possible solution to it · say what actions you might take if the need arises. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Mr Black, I am writing to bring to your attention an issue my family and I are facing
due to
your
dog
's presence. I would like to point out the problem which we have been facing.
Firstly
, your
dog
always barks when my daughter arrives at your home for tuition. She is fright
from
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the
dog
, and she told me that she wants to change her tuition because of
this
.
Moreover
, your
dog
was eating my
garden
grass whenever you went
for
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jogging with it. The reason why your
dog
makes inconvenience to us is that my daughter does not concentrate on her studies, so she thought she will be getting low scores
in
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due to
this
disturbance.
Furthermore
, I will be planning to celebrate my wife's birthday in my
garden
, but
due to
your
dog
's bad behaviour, I am not able to celebrate it in my
garden
. To address
this
issue, I will suggest some solutions.
Firstly
, you could train your
dog
when to bark, and where to bark, so that the other neighbours like me can live without any problem.
Secondly
, you should eat your
dog
some delicious
animals'
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food.
As a result
, I will not remake my
garden
again. If you do not take
this
matter
as
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a
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serious
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then
I will call the head of the animal help department.
Consequently
, you can talk with him for
further
process. I hope you understand our problems and look into
this
matter as soon as possible. Best regards, Milav Soni
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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