*The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007*

*The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007*
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The line graph provides information about the
consumption
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of margarine,
low fat
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low-fat
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& reduced spreads, and butter. From an
overall
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respective, it is evident that margarine and butter
consumption
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had a downward trend.
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, low fat & reduced spreads were added to the diagram in 1996. Focusing on butter’s data, it started at 140
grams
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in 1981 before reaching the highest point at 160
grams
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5 years later. From 1986 to 2007, the figure for butter gradually declined to nearly 50
grams
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at the end
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of the period. Looking at closely margarine
consumption
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, it experienced a fluctuation over the period of 26 years. Margarine’s
consumption
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reduced by approximately 20
grams
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in 1986, and went up to 100
grams
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in 1991,
then
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remained until 1996.
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,
low fat
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& reduced spreads saw a sharp increase from around 10
grams
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(1996) to 80
grams
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(2001) before going down to 70
grams
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(2007).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.
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